Sunday, November 16, 2008

Writers Block Challege # 51



Solace:

I am holding up a mirror
It is holding back the tide
All the monsters that could harm you
Are here on the other side

You are safe within the vessel
Safe is what you'll always be
Though the demons think they see you
All they really see is me

Poem by Rani Kaye
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13 comments:

  1. Joyce Marie TaylorNovember 16, 2008 at 10:16 AM

    Excellent job...so insightful and probing...makes one think.

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  2. Heather BNovember 16, 2008 at 10:31 AM

    A beautiful post Rani, makes you ponder about yourself. Thanks for sharing, Heather

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  3. Mel WeinerthNovember 16, 2008 at 10:58 AM

    A good one so much talent an none for me .

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  4. brian aysonNovember 16, 2008 at 11:29 AM

    this is great! fascinating! i love it...

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  5. dp ♥November 16, 2008 at 11:46 AM

    thought provoking write, well penned!

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  6. Annie CNovember 16, 2008 at 1:19 PM

    thats really a fine post! thanks for sharing your gift..

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  7. Jimmie KeplerNovember 16, 2008 at 2:58 PM

    Very nice

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  8. Pat AngloswissNovember 17, 2008 at 4:33 AM

    Food for thought - very good

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  9. marlicia fernandezNovember 17, 2008 at 9:06 AM

    I like this one, Rani. It says so much in so few (beautiful) words. Nice job!

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  10. Clare MNovember 17, 2008 at 1:45 PM

    Magical.

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  11. Mary TereseNovember 17, 2008 at 4:44 PM

    oh, so beautiful! how wonderful to be protected by someone...

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  12. Terry WritesNovember 19, 2008 at 1:34 PM

    a fresh look...well done

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  13. Melissa WellsNovember 22, 2008 at 12:36 PM

    Wow, this was so awesome! I loved everything about it. It was sweet, loving and very very well written. Excellent work, without a doubt!

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